The People

The People

A Poem by Saddam

It was journey from one city to town
Train was running with passengers uncount
There were lots of people
The people who make country by tongue
The people who are future leader
The people who carried the worlds on shoulders
But can not bear two inches ticket of Rs 10.


© 2015 Saddam



Author's Note

Saddam
The people who carried the worlds on shoulders
But can not bear two inches ticket of Rs 10.

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I wish everyone would notice such simple things! Sometimes the only way we can expect our message to get out is through writing ourselves...

Posted 2 Years Ago


Yes, we are good in telling we are responsible enough, but the truth is we are still escaping from certain roles we actually have to do.

Short but profound.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear that you feel so....
This is ridiculous to see how people steal from their own property and tell children not to do so.
It kind of surprises that the same people have different opinions on lot of other things and without having any opinion our own misbehavior of the ticketless travel.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Saddam

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much friend.
Your thoughts are so pure and honest.
Nice poem.. The lines are short yet conveys a deeper meaning. It tells how rushed we are, it tells we live in this fast moving world.. Good work.. Keep it up!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear...
Observing our surroundings and reflecting on our experiences with true feelings.
How is our world bringing bearing to lives in it?

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear friend...
a good write my friend, such powerful allegory

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

2 Years Ago

Thanks a lot dear friend.......Much Appreciated.
"The people who are future leader
The people who carried the worlds on shoulders"

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much Sir....
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

You are welcome,sir. ....:)........
an honest insight to the reality behind the truth, i love the simplicity of the words that carry so much meaning.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love your words and thoughts Saddam :) Always a pleasure to read your work :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


good Satire...yea some people worry so much about the rising corruption n all but forget that their conduct counts too... good one :)

Posted 2 Years Ago



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RASRA, BALLIA, Uttar Pradesh, India



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