An Untold Story

An Untold Story

It was thrust of thirty years

For such a long period he never desires

But now, when he had passed half life

Raising his untold story;

He is twice of her age

But want to make it, a bond

She had denied but knows him closely

Soft hearted, loving and careful.

 

She wanted it too, but has fear of society

The man; never gave her happiness

Here she is happy and feel comfortable

Other side, he spends his time for money.

 

 One day she dares to accept it

Things change so quickly, not in fare

But she stands strongly for a reason

Both were at a line of fire but combined

They face many minds of society

But they were happy for each other

After a period, they won

And now they are writing own story.

By saddam husen

16/08/2015

Author's Note

Inspired with the movie "Nihshabd"

Reviews

[Naina]

Wow.. that's so nicely written Saddam.. It perfectly describes the mental state of two people who are in love but because of their age differences they feared to be together.. This is reality, our society never accepts such things.. But am happy that you give such a nice ending to this poem.. great work.. Keep writing..:)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.... Much appreciating your vision.
Thanks for reading it.

[Naina]

my pleasure.....:))

[DIVYA]

A happy ending after all. Great love story. Well narrated my friend.

[Ayushi yadav]

nice one saddam
true lines..

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.

[Ayushi yadav]

welcome ....

[Penny]

A very nice attempt. Well done

[CA Anurag Sharma]

to be honest I havent seen the movie... but i feel our society has a strong crush on numbers especially age... I just dont like it... life is not to be counted in years....its in moments.... good one Saddam :)

[MsJewel]

I haven't seen the movie, but I enjoyed your poem. Wonderful writing my friend.

:) Julie

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend....

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend....

[nazia]

This is simply amazing Saddam. How you got inspiration from that movie I know not but I guess this work could inspire a lot of people in itself. Great write :)

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear friend....

[Chirag Kumar]

Nicely written Saddam. Loved it :)

[Mitali Shah]

Good one Saddam. Haven't seen the movie completely but can connect with your piece of untold story

[AaronFreitas]

A nice write Saddam... its amazing how things in life end up working out... may not be what we expected but it becomes who we are :)