PROMISE

PROMISE

A Poem by Saddam
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Story about two who made promise yet one forgot it.

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PROMISE

08/10/2015

Under the beautiful shadowy tree

They made a promise to live together;

‘I’ll wait for you in wind or rain, sleet or snow

Nothing will keep you away from me forever’.




That was the promise made by them

But soon spring gone and autumn came;

One remembers the promise and lived it

But other forget it in own fame.




After several years of silence and distance

The met at place where it was made;

They looked each other with straight eyes

One was smiling though other was sad.


By saddam husen

14/10/2015

©2015saddamhusen


© 2015 Saddam



Author's Note

Saddam
One was smiling though other was sad.

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Very good writing. Love the rhyming. Keep up the good work.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


well conveyed !loved reading it..
Promise is described so honestly

Posted 11 Months Ago


A good write up dear. Its from starting till end an eye catcher. Well done!!

Let me share this on my facebook page :)..

Thank you again..

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

11 Months Ago

Thanks a lot friend.
I can relate to this.Nice lines! :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Saddam

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much.
Currently going through this and it hurts so deeply. Thank you for the piece.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Saddam

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much friend..
a beautiful piece my friend


Posted 1 Year Ago


Saddam

1 Year Ago

Thanks Friend.
Interesting layout of your words.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much dear friend.
Josie E. Cook M. A.

1 Year Ago

You are welcome!
Definitely it is for the readers to understand.
But the one who has gone through it can better relate.
What I take back is 'Promises were meant to be kept or meant to be broken'
Beautiful concept & wonderful representation.


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saddam

1 Year Ago

You are right but Promise must be kept and alive it forever, I mean it.
Thank you so much dea.. read more
the suspense!!!!!!!! i enjoyed it the poem and wished it were a little longer

Posted 1 Year Ago


So beautiful, loved the end..it made me think..which one would be happy and which one would be sad. There could be different attributes. Made me think a lot. Keep writing !

Posted 1 Year Ago



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