Homemade Brownies

Homemade Brownies

A Poem by Michelle Rachel
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I can smell baking in the oven
And I'm in the living room
Sitting next to my own piece of heaven 
And the timer goes off, "Do I have to move?"

I mean, they're only homemade brownies,
Just one little pan
They can't be that important
Not as much as he says I am
So I'll just sit here
Only a few minutes longer
Am I still so blinded by the fear
Of what might happen if I wander
It's just a pan of homemade brownies

Kids constantly begging my attention
Way too many things to do
These days all I want is peace and quiet
When he will get home will never be too soon

I mean, they're only homemade brownies,
Just one little pan
They can't be that important
Not as much as he says I am
So I'll just sit here
Only a few minutes longer
Am I still so blinded by the fear
Of what might happen if I wander
It's just a pan of homemade brownies

Are they really so important?
Will the world fall apart without them?

I mean, they're only homemade brownies,
Just one little pan
They can't be that important
Not as much much as he says I am
So I'll just sit here
Only a few minutes longer
Am I still so blinded by the fear
Of what might happen if I wander
It's just a pan of homemade brownies

Just a pan of homemade brownies...

© 2016 Michelle Rachel


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is it just a pan of homemade brownies?..or is it something alot bigger than that? Great use of words to leave the writer with something to think about after.
But I must say... You do have me craving some homemade brownies now. haha
Thanks for the read

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Sounds like the brownies are very important.
Great metaphors contained within.



Posted 7 Years Ago


is it just a pan of homemade brownies?..or is it something alot bigger than that? Great use of words to leave the writer with something to think about after.
But I must say... You do have me craving some homemade brownies now. haha
Thanks for the read

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Michelle Rachel
Michelle Rachel

South Bend , IN



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