No words To express

No words To express

A Poem by Sahar moonlight
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Knowing that one of my teachers passed away, i feel really bad. And as usual writing cools me somehow. Being awake since last 30hours, my mind isn't stable and my words aren't arranged.

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White to black
In one moment
Happiness to sorrow

Memories
Just return
As you leave
And never come again

In minds and hearts
Always there

Sleepless  nights
A  tear  escapes
 
 As music plays
And your memory occupies my mind



© 2012 Sahar moonlight



Author's Note

Sahar moonlight
I wanted to share despite the fact that it isnt written properly.

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A beautiful poem that really does express emotion even though it isn't written the way you did before. I especially loved that "memories just return.." part. Funny how the moment you find out a person you know is dead, that's when you remember all the memories you shared with the person. One moment, happiness to sorrow. So fast things can happen.

My condolences for your loss. I hope you feel better soon. And this is an amazing poem. :)

~XYZ

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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:( sadness & grief are felt & worded in different ways.. sorry for your loss. May God heal your heart & soul. Let him hold your heart. He won't break it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


This expression of your heart is beautiful!... and I find the emotion carries a sadness which is raw and honest. It felt very real, my friend. When something comes from your heart it cannot be denied. You have written a tender piece. Well done!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Natty, this is utterly beautiful, you know I have those moments on each and every other song, I got another memory? very visual/spatial...
You just wrote that out for me within your hearts ink.
Thank you so much for this write.

E.L.

Posted 4 Years Ago


SERENE and nice poem!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this was nice ... well done =)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful poem that really does express emotion even though it isn't written the way you did before. I especially loved that "memories just return.." part. Funny how the moment you find out a person you know is dead, that's when you remember all the memories you shared with the person. One moment, happiness to sorrow. So fast things can happen.

My condolences for your loss. I hope you feel better soon. And this is an amazing poem. :)

~XYZ

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Not written properly? I dare to argue that! This was penned excellent. When I read this my primary reaction was...a feeling of being alone. Or maybe there is something plaguing the mind, making it so you can't sleep. I might have over-studied this too, but regardless I thought you did a great job in bringing this to life.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sahar moonlight

5 Years Ago

Thanks alot
Hello Natty... this is a lovely poem... very well done indeed.

*bird*

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sahar moonlight

5 Years Ago

Thanks Bird, i appreciate
A very sad poem. Make our heart sad to lose someone we know. Especially a liked teacher. I like the short statements. Allowing the story to flow out properly. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sahar moonlight

5 Years Ago

Thanks alot for your words Coyote
there is something called free verse and i thought this was an excellent expression of your grief. great poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sahar moonlight

5 Years Ago

thanks bird for ur words

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Sahar moonlight
Sahar moonlight

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Hello everybody. Here is Sahar. I am from Lebanon living in France. I'm a mathematician but sometimes I find in myself the will to write something. I enjoy reading a lot and I was glad to join this.. more..

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