Invisible Man

Invisible Man

A Poem by Sahar moonlight

Invisible man

Muted voice

Ignored feelings

Used and used

Shattered dreams

Blackness and darkness

Bitterness and sorrow

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I'm visible man

Raised my voice

Expressed my feelings

Marked my identity

Dreamt to achieve

With hope and light

Sweetness and happiness

 

© 2012 Sahar moonlight


Author's Note

Sahar moonlight
I am not sure if this is considered a poem.
some times my mind needs to get on to a paper.... just as it is with no change.
That was the result.

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it starts with despair then ends with hope. there's conflict in this poem and resolution in this poem that makes it an excellent piece. great job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

If this doesn't qualify as a poem I don't know what does.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A great write:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's so true. People can be invisible and visible depending on the day. I love the format and the words are simple yet to the point.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the contrast presented in so few a lines was worth putting ink onto paper..and I dream to be only the latter facet of the man :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Polar opposites, yin and yang, light and dark. Your piece takes and places us upon the scales and lets us see that there are two sides to everything, two ways to see a situation and always more than one option.

Great Ink!
Aaron

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There are two sides to every coin...You have depicted both sides of the coin in a very poignant way. Nicely done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem really made me think. I had to read it a few times to understand it. Other than that I found it very interesting

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting piece of poetry!



Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really enjoy this. I love how you put just thoughts down; amazing! Perfectly done Natty!

Peace

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sahar moonlight
Sahar moonlight

France



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Hello everybody. Here is Sahar. I am from Lebanon living in France. I'm a mathematician but sometimes I find in myself the will to write something. I enjoy reading a lot and I was glad to join this.. more..

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