Unsaid Words

Unsaid Words

A Poem by Sahar moonlight
"

It says it all...

"


Words
Feelings may hurt
Soul may burn
Heart may stab


Words
Pain may heal
Senses may soothe
Sorrows may end


But
I was left with

Unsaid
Words

© 2012 Sahar moonlight



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Sahar moonlight
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Magic of the words,
so carefully you breed.

In this short poem,
this magic you have freed.



I really loved the emotion that reflects off from your writing. It is quite captivating. I couldn't help admiring the repeatition of "words" and the finishing "unsaid words". Classy and elegant!



Posted 5 Years Ago


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I love the title and the words. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Sahar moonlight

5 Years Ago

thanks :)
Wonderful poem, short and bittersweet. Everybody has to decide time and time again whether it is worse to say certain things or leave them unsaid and whatever choice is made may not have the desired outcome. Sometimes words have quite an impact on us an can throw us off-course, sometimes unsaid words can ruin everything. Well written!

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Words are powerful. They can both heal and harm people. Silence, even if it sometimes scream louder than words, leaves one confused and in pain. The pain from silence may even be more extreme than from words. Great write.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I've never thought about it that way. Great poem

Posted 5 Years Ago


Simply amazing, so well said in a few short words.


Posted 5 Years Ago


Vow! Simply vow work!

Posted 5 Years Ago


wow... it actually says a lot :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


there is a lot of unsaid words in this world

Posted 5 Years Ago



Fair enough, I see what words can do. Bravo!

Posted 5 Years Ago


These unsaid words, actually say all. What a magik~way of writing! crafted here as a piece of self knowledge, and brevity. I adore.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Sahar moonlight
Sahar moonlight

France



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Hello everybody. Here is Sahar. I am from Lebanon living in France. I'm a mathematician but sometimes I find in myself the will to write something. I enjoy reading a lot and I was glad to join this.. more..

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