Imprisoned

Imprisoned

A Poem by Sahar moonlight

 

 

 

 

 

Imprisoned

Imprisoned by thoughts

Thoughts that eat my mind

Thoughts that turns my day into night

A moonless night I try to escape

 

 

Imprisoned

Imprisoned by feelings

Feelings that press on my heart

Feelings that hold my every breath

Every breath from my chest try to escape

 

 

Imprisoned

Imprisoned by Dreams

Dreams that take me high

Dreams that show me a bitter now

A world I try to escape

 

 

Imprisoned

Imprisoned in me

and there is no way to escape

© 2012 Sahar moonlight


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Imprisoned.
I captured the sight,
I imagined the night,
Instead of delight
What I found is of fright

Now that's all I can say. Nice wordings, good flow and harmonious rhythm. A very good piece. The picture that came with it just enhanced its beauty to be true.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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very true and beautifuly written...loved it..thanks Natty.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful. I love it. :) well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sahar moonlight
Sahar moonlight

France



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Hello everybody. Here is Sahar. I am from Lebanon living in France. I'm a mathematician but sometimes I find in myself the will to write something. I enjoy reading a lot and I was glad to join this.. more..

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