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This comes as no surprise.

Chelsea, comes to visit me

With her darling grin

Remove her bandages

And set her smile free

(She has no sin x2)

Her scars they, shine in the darkest place

She doesn't want her face

To be apart of her mothers descries

All alone her heart turns to stone

When she dies,

When she cries

The hooks on her heart

They tear her sides

When she dies,

When she cries

The knife is touching her skin

Can't you feel her giving in?

The blood runs through her teeth

As she is falling from grace 

My soul feels petrified

As I stare into her eyes

A tear runs down her cheek

Cant you see her smiles for me?

(Smiles for me)

So she'll cut her face

WIth a switch blade knife

So now were always smiling

One last kiss to bring her back

And now I see our pain

(Chelsea sings)

The knife is touching my skin

I think I'm giving in

The blood runs through my teeth

As I am falling from grace

His soul feels petrified

As he stares in my eyes

A tear runs down my cheek

I think his smiles for me

(Smiles for me)

Author's Note

A song I've been working on for the past month.
I've got all the guitar parts in
I'm a little lost when it comes to the next verse.
I could use some advise.
Its a terrible mental block really.
I'm not sure what she would say to him
It also needs a title.

Reviews

[lilyluvsulots]

I see your partial to writing poems/songs. This one is a lot better than any i have written by far.