B!UE CO!OR

This was a Creative Writing assignment I had to do on Wednesday. I was about the color blue.

Color blue…
Color blue…
Color blue…
Color blue…
Color blue…

Everywhere blue
Nowhere blue
Always blue
Never blue

Sky
Sign

Blue color…
Blue color…
Blue color…
Blue color…
Blue color…
 

Reviews

[Gandré]

the repetition is the instrument of this poem with its interesting echo; it is a psychedelic poem, I liked it!

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I like it...it sounds kinda like a song...or at least i read it like one...lol
Great Job :)

[Skye Manson]

I thought it was good, if a little repetitive. My favorite color is blue so you already held some favor with me.