Hey God!

Hey God!

A Poem by Maan
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Few complains to God and that's all.

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Hey God,
your people and your world,
perfectly perfect but imperfect,
blind with eyes open,
they consider things with eyes closed,

Hey God,
Where is love? The children ask
Where is peace? Every heart cries
Where is God? Everyone calls,
Where is honesty? Where is sincerity?

Hey God,
your people and your world,
the rich is getting richest,
the poor is getting poorest,
the cruel is getting cruelest

Hey God,
the evil is being practiced,
religion has turned into religions,
respect is lost,
money is god, money is all


Hey God,
where is the guideline?
what is the guideline?
what you have told us is not all,
tell us the new path,

Hey God,
your people and your world
like a symmetry of disturbed path,
a scene of terror,
a perfect error

Hey God,
I know you know all,
it’s you, who is giving chance
but till how far,
tell the innocent what you want. .

Please God
I know you are...

© 2012 Maan


Author's Note

Maan
I don't know why I wrote this one. Literally I don't know. I'm not a big fan of God, neither of religions. I sometimes call myself hypocrite, uh I guess that's what I am. Anyways the poem, do let me know what you feel and think about it. Feel free to share your views. .

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I love this One 100 God King of Hearts and Love and worlds of Hearts

Posted 2 Years Ago


This is my first read of your writes..And I am glad I chose this write ( looking at the title, of course).. I loved the content of this write..
All your questions are authentic..
I find many precious gems sprawled in your write..
In the fourth stanza, evil being practiced, region turning into religions.. In the fifth, the scene of terror a perfect error... And in the first, your people and your world perfectly perfect but imperfect... And of course, all those questions...very beautiful indeed!
Faith factor is what really works.... As many regions as many religions and languages as many names...
Thought and contemplation will give clarity and enlighten us on this particular topic..
But reading this is a pure pleasure for me.. The content of this write has really touched me..I see a great writer in you..
You will learn the nuances of grammar and other things as you read others' works and there are some very kind writers who guide us and give their honest opinions.. That helps us a lot..
I shall be reading all your writes soon..


Posted 2 Years Ago


I recommend reading Alexander Pope's 'Essay on Man' as a poetic followup to this.

In God's, one single can its end produce;
Yet serves to second too some other use.
So Man, who here seems principal alone,
Perhaps acts second to some sphere unknown,
Touches some wheel, or verges to some goal;
'Tis but a part we see, and not a whole.
When the proud steed shall know why Man restrains
His fiery course, or drives him o'er the plains;
When the dull Ox, why now he breaks the clod,
Is now a victim, and now Egypt's God
Then shall Man's pride and dullness comprehend
His actions', passions', being's, use and end;
Why doing, suff'ring, check'd, impell'd; and why
This hour a slave, the next a deity.
Then say not Man's imperfect, Heav'n in fault;
Say rather, Man's as perfect as he ought;
His knowledge measur'd to his state and place,
His time a moment, and a point his space.

Posted 5 Years Ago


An interesting, thought provoking write, well executed.. N

Posted 5 Years Ago


He has a plan... We'll see soon enough.

Posted 5 Years Ago


In fear no one will understand God or the Grand Design. It's best to be saved than to wonder why. Well written.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Kneel, drop your eyes,
Lift the weight , let your heart be a feather,
Find a spot ,today, everyday
Where you Kneel, release the weight and....
Let your heart be a feather.


Posted 6 Years Ago


Well, first I would say that if you actually believe in God I assure you the He is a big fan of yours. Religions do not reflect the character of God. You made this point in your poem. The beauty, and hope and freedom to cry out in anger and pain reflect Him better.
Need to use the rich are getting richer, poor are getting poorer etc...
Nice exploration and a good direction for your young mind to consider.

Posted 6 Years Ago


I am not big on religion either, but this is an awesome poem. You make really good points in this piece. Keep it up.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Kes
I'm an atheist - mainly because of the reasons you've stated to be honest. Since I was very little, I've refused to believe that there's someone or something out there who's supposed to be perfect, but sees the evil, and the pain, and sadness in human beings and lets it all just carry on. I was a pretty intense kid. :P
This is a great poem.
K

Posted 6 Years Ago


Alverrann

6 Years Ago

that makes sense. Or even better, Maybe in heaven we didn't have bodies, so he sent us down here to .. read more
Kes

6 Years Ago

Okay, fair enough. :)
K
Alverrann

6 Years Ago

sorry.

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