If you want

She is a riddle that can't be solve

If you want to know,

the verity about life,

then you need to witness,

the lies about it,

If you want to live,

when you start,

you need to die,

and diminish the sighs,

If you want to care,

you must know the torture,

to soothe the anguish she has,

you need to experience,

If you want to believe,

you must know something,

that keeps you satisfied,

without a modest doubt,

If you need to find,

the lies she live,

then you must recognize,

the truth about it.

If its simple, 

then

its all she got,

Life is trueness,

trueness is sin,

sin is silence,

silence is sigh,

sigh is demise,

demise is beginning,

beginning is far,

far is dreams,

and 

her dreams holds life,

If you want to know her,

you need to discover,

her lonely existence,

from the very start of it all. . 

Reviews

[InsanityWriter]

Intriguing. :) Great write!

[Dana Dawud]

she : Life.

[David Scott]

Very much like the ideas here. If we could only really know eachother...
Liked the circle of life bit in 6th verse. Not sure I agree with each word defined there but I get the idea you were going for.
I do think the best free verse I read has some pattern I can identify. This could be very good with some more work.

[Newspaper Skeleton]

Sin is silence... So true. Wonderful piece.

[Legolas]

Great job! I loved this. To truly help someone you need to have experiance and/or a great knowledge about it. Its has an apostrophe in it;)

[Dark Poet]

Very interesting idea to write about, but i like it :)

[The Jay]

The idea that is being expressed through the poem that in order to know something properly you have to go through it or know how it started is quite fascinating. Can be expressed better but the idea comes across.
A few amends can add better flow. For instance, it would have sounded better if it were,"If you want to live, you must die first."

[Pax]

your poem are consistent in many ways. i enjoyed it.
a lot of question just like a riddle like what you said.