Blue

Me and my friend were giving each other words and had to quickly write a poem around it. Most of the poems turned out silly.

Come now, I understand

Life sucks

The world is cruel

The day is in slow motion

Never ending torment

But we all must endure mondays

Reviews

[RTB]

great work SamSham!! keep it up!!

[An owl on the moon]

I love the way you processed this with a friend! It really has a perfect flow of thought, with snippets of life captured line by line. Very fun, vivid write!

[kewlbluetiger]

LoL! I wouldn't say this was silly! Well, maybe a little! I liked it! It has this endearing quality of a parent explaining life to a child in the first few lines but then ends with a great punch! Thanks for the fun read on a Wednesday that feels like a Monday.

[dc]

Short. Poetic. Simple...
This is brilliant.

It's always impressive when a solid idea can be brought around using minimal words.

[AK]

This made me smile, on a Monday no less! Keep em coming.