First kiss

This poem isn't like my others... tried a different pattern and not sure what I think of it.

That first kiss, I knew,
There was something so different,
Something special about you.
That gentle brush against my skin,
Set my hair on end, like electric,
A sweet, unexpected sin.
Those seconds felt like hours,
As if only us existed,
Like the world was only ours.
You pulled away and I let out the air,
I didn't know I were holding,
In that moment I'd laid myself bare.
My body reacted, my soul screamed,
Calling and begging for you,
The world around me gleamed.
In a way I'd never seen before,
New colours, sounds, music
Which touched me to the core.
It spoke directly to my heart,
I couldn't forget the way I felt,
That intense, consuming spark.
That moment changed all,
I thought I knew but never did,
How deeply I could fall.

Reviews

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I remember my first kiss. I didn't expect it to be so soft. I think I saw stars.

[Ashish]

Aww.. That was really romantic..
Though I had not got my "first kiss", still I am able to get the feel ..
Ha-ha please ignore the above line

Amazing :)

[Esther]

Love this :) especially this part:

"That intense, consuming spark.
That moment changed all,
I thought I knew but never did,
How deeply I could fall."

Nice work!!