unseen love

Unseen love,
I hear you
your whisper so soft,
A rhythm, 
To the heart beat.

Should i sing?
Should i dance?
Or Should i keep listening?

Where are you?
I do not know.
you are here and there,
of i am sure.

The whisper to my ears,
tells me you are close.
I am not in hurry,

Anytime you wish,
show yourself, 
i can wait.
And sing me the words again.

I'm head over heels
with this sound i hear.
oh my unseen love,
Feelings feel so great!.

Reviews

[Rinzin Samdup]

Jacob, thank you for the read. appreciate your review. Thax.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes the anticipation is better than the real thing...but love will come to those who wait (as they say) and often the most patient love is the one that lasts longest.

nicely expressed, and welcome to the site.

j.

[Rinzin Samdup]

thank you binibiningmaya. Sir is little too much to address. Samdup is Ok. :)

[binibiningmaya]

Lovely poem..
Unseen love and finally you saw..
Great job Sir.

[Rinzin Samdup]

Indra..i appreciate your time for the read. Thank you.

[Indra Neil]

thoughts, feelings and emotions are beautifully expressed in this fine write! well done! :)

[Rinzin Samdup]

Thank you Andrew. appreciate your kind words.

[andrew mitchell]

This was very nice like a singing minstrel in the waiting, you are ready for the love to appear in your life