A while ago, I read a poem like this, but that was some what humorous, but this poem of yours is stark dark. I want to mention a book, by the Legendary Poet of Italian Literature Dante Alighieri, Divine Comedy. In which the poet himself, is on a journey of three places, first Inferno (Hell), second Purgatory(A place for repentance of sinners), and third Paradise( Abode of God).
In fact, I can see the whole book of his, summarized into a small poetry.
If everyone begin to get feared by God and Hell, then everyone in this world won't commit crime
A wonderful attempt to instill fear of Hell in sinners.
A while ago, I read a poem like this, but that was some what humorous, but this poem of yours is stark dark. I want to mention a book, by the Legendary Poet of Italian Literature Dante Alighieri, Divine Comedy. In which the poet himself, is on a journey of three places, first Inferno (Hell), second Purgatory(A place for repentance of sinners), and third Paradise( Abode of God).
In fact, I can see the whole book of his, summarized into a small poetry.
If everyone begin to get feared by God and Hell, then everyone in this world won't commit crime
A wonderful attempt to instill fear of Hell in sinners.
A hard topic. A lot of people believe this is hell on earth. I disagree. I believe we can make our world heaven or hell. It is our decision. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
I totally agree to your views! My pleasure ! :)
read moreI totally agree to your views! My pleasure ! :)
Those who show hell to others when alive; are shown hell upon death! That is what I wanted to convey.. read moreThose who show hell to others when alive; are shown hell upon death! That is what I wanted to convey! :)
A girl with a generous and dwindling soul, attempting to speak my heart out to the world. I'm enamoured by people and their behavior and often dedicate my poems and articles to them.
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