Take a stand

Its time to take a stand

  Its our turn now

Grab my hand

  Sit and listen good

You'll hear the story we have to tell

  Im done with the games

We're going now

  We'll run away

And show them how

  We can do better

We can fight

  Or we can love

Lose it all

  Or kill the dove

Peace is pathetic

  War isnt better

Sadness is poetic

  I is only a letter

Reviews

[December Blaize]

This is one of my favorite poems on Writer's Cafe, actually, because it's so full of truth and it flows beautifully. I can't re-read it enough times. I especially love the lines "Peace is pathetic, war isn't better, sadness is poetic, I is only a letter". You've got a way with words.

[Hiddenfire]

From one good poem to the next. I enjoyed the way that you phrased the poem and it had excellent flow and a steady beat to it. Shrug your shoulders just to spite them, is what comes to mind emotionally when I read this, nicely done.

[Angelic Surrender]

Lovely. Great work :)