Memories

The clock stops

Silence spills

The pain comes seeping in

The tears fall

Raining down

Mixing a bloody river

They don't understand

They never will

Theres things i never tell

They don't care

They never could

All they do is lie, use, and glare

Excuses, i tell to keep them away

I cant afford to be hurt again

Im scared and alone

Cant you see

All my scars are shown

My heart is shattered

No one can fix it

Not even time can heal

People have tried

But my trust only hides

As everything falls to pieces

I scramble to pick them up

The memories i see

They only bring me pain

I wish they didn't hurt

If only they were gone

If only they would burn

Reviews

[Hiddenfire]

The build up of passion till the revelation in the final line worked for me. It starts out strong and then it lulls slightly, (in a good way) in the middle before going back up in emotion at the very end.
Aside from the occasional lowercase I, I found only one typo: "All they do it lie, use, and glare" it instead of the word is.

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I can feel your pain in this write, Such a deep powerful write.
Nicely expressed.