Nothing but crap

T_T..... i hate this poem....

I cant help but feel

Like im all alone

Music helps me deal

But im still on my own

 

My heart begins to mend

Everything goes wrong

And its the fanile, the end

Of my stupid life song

 

I try to write

But my mind is full of gray

The stupid things i fight

Make me turn away

 

Nevertheless

I never forget the pain

I never forget the mess

As i stand in the rain

 

Im not as strong

As everyone may think

Ive been hurt for just so long

And into a corner i shrink......

Reviews

[Lina Grey]

it makes sense, or maybe it's just because I've felt like this before so I understand. It's very sincere and a little broken, but still a good poem. Thank you.

[Tomislav Petricevic]

I have felt that way a lot of times...I think it's a good poem, rhymes are excellent and it's so sincere. And your style of writing can really be felt in this one....I don't know how to describe it, but the poem kinda screams "Kurra!" :D