Inside Me

In me

Is a lake

In a dove

In a cup

Is a ring

Inside a ring

Is a promise

In a movement

In a scar

In a bowl

In the long winding past

In a book

Inside Noah

Is an Ark

And a laugh

And a colour

Inside green

In a humungous tree

Is a key

In a lock

In a wife

In her heart

Is me. 

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Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

simple short lines
nice timing,
nice accent on what's inside of everyone and everything
and the Me in the poem.
j.

[Samith Pich]

Thank you :)

[Emily B]

lovely

[GridLok]

Elegant simplicity; conceptually intriguing - so much so I'm going to add it to my Favourites.

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Nice Posture cute structure good write........

[Nishant Gupta]

nice one read mine too "QUEST OF LIFE".

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

A beautiful way of expressing that valued thought - that yes everything begins and ends with the one you love.I like the pattern here..not giving away much..intriguing and yet filled with an endearing candor.

[emmajoy]

.. In life is an everything for two? Beautifully put, whether i've understood properly or not.