Falling into Darkness

Collapsing from the inside out

My blood running to meet a drought

My happiness nearing an end

Knowing that the pain will only ascend

Unleashing hell upon me

So stuck that I can not flee

Feeling the poison running through my veins

Tied up in these coppered, bloody chains

The breaths I take are full of doubt

Yet I dare not let out a scream

For if this secret is revealed

I'll be put to a permanent dream

Reviews

[Carolin Meisner]

WOW, this poem is beautiful!
So much character, so much pain.
I love this writing, cause it's deep, the feelings over flooding.
Good job!

Carolin