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WHEN DREAMS ARE NOT WORTH DREAMING FOR


A Poem by penloverfool
"
when dreams are not worth-dreaming for...
"

I queerly dream when dreams are not worth-dreaming for

Hoping to heal the aching of my heart

I dream when waves are sadly rushing on the shore

Trying my hulking pains to drift apart

 

I close my eyes to feel my painted fantasy

Although I hear the dripping of my tears

I view; I am a butterfly in ecstasy

And yet, I float on the ocean of fears

 

I think of fancy wonderland and paradise

To escape the lashing of melancholy

I roam along the boulevard where no one cries

To hide the avalanche of agony

 

I imagine beneath the mystic moonlight beam

That the nymphs of the night rejoice with me

But in reality, greedy clouds block the gleam

Admonishing horror and misery

 

I ask the stars above to illumine my soul

Which gropes amidst the mockery of fate

I importune heaven not to be very cruel

And spare my foibles from gargantuan hate

 

I oddly dream when dreams are not worth-dreaming for

Wishing to halt the bleeding of my heart

I dream when lonely tears are flooding on the floor

Teaching my scornful anguish to depart

 


© 2008 penloverfool



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I have to agree with Lalli. This poem was executed beautifully. Everything from the title to the very last line draws the reader in. More people should read this. My only suggestion (and even then, I don't think this is necessary at all) is in the first line, you use the word dream three times. It may just be that I woke up about ten minutes ago..but the first line did throw me off because of the repeated "dream" and I had to look at it twice. I think it is probably a mistake on my part more than it is any fault of yours. But, if I'm not psychotic in my tired state, you might want to look at it.

Over all though, a beautiful piece of art.

Posted 5 Months Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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