A Kiss with You

My first kiss made me feel this way

 Can i share a kiss with you?

 One of our feelings share,

kind, warm, yet rare.

one might dare 

to question the mind of ours

for having so little care

for something so small and fair

 Dancing are our hearts 

to the beat of their own

they never stop racing 

never are they slowing down

but they speed 

so fast they beat it seems 

covering our minds with fog

 The pit of my stomach feels as though

it is on the other side of the world

what a strange thought of such a sensation?

to be falling from as high as you can be, yet it's 

never ending because i'm standing still.

 Can i share a kiss with you? 

Reviews

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. This is beautiful! this is the most positive and cute thing I have read from you. Different from what you usually write. I can see that you have been changing

[Sammie Sanchez]

thank you been doing better than i was a couple of weeks ago... i think this is my favorite so far