Show & Tell

I'm feeling romantic

Tell me that my blush is cute

Tell me my hair fall just the right way

Tell me my lips are soft

Tell me my skin is oh so smooth

Tell me my smile is beautiful

And I will show you true beauty 

The harmonies of a laughter

The light of a thousand ideas

The small infinity pools of jade

The curves of a woman

The birth hips of a mother

The scars of a survivor 

The heart of the strong

The voice of the experienced

The memories of the weak

Tell me I am yours

Yours to protect

Yours to hold

Yours to love

Yours to be perfect

Yours to be beautiful

Yours to be forever

Reviews

[CMC]

Beautiful sentiments. I would love to see you squeeze out a revision just to get polish on all of the ideas here. The repetition of "yours" as well as "tell me" really give the reader a sense of the longing in the narrator's voice. I appreciate this.