Rejuvenation

Rejuvenation

A Poem by Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

Rejuvenation


This work of mine is dedicated to my new life:



Rejuvenation...


To
The Beams that pierces the murky piles of the clouds
and falls on the Wild lilacs of the green smooth meadows...

To
The Butterfly that unleashes herself from the trap
of the malicious webs of the spiders and fly to the distant blue...

To
The Babbles of a new-born baby , sacred, fresh and pristine
No worries of who-got pleased and humiliated with her hubbub...

To
The Birds that takes the wings high , crossing the borders,
Human have created , breaking the rules of their Filthy Governance...

To
The Rivers that curves all the way down through the stubborn rocks
and mingles with the massiveness of the majestic ocean...

To
The Cobbler with his bruised feet , lifts high the hammer
and hits the anvil , to guard our feet against spike of pains...

To
The Warriors who proudly welcomes the heat of Bullets
And dies with the respects , they have for their Nations...

To
The Joy of a lost child , when he saw his father carrying
a Paper wind mill and searching his tiny boy, amongst the crowds...

To,
all the happiness you get, beside the pains,
all the doors that opens, when you were lost,
all the freedom you feels, when you are caged,

It
is
the Rejuvenation...


Time: 10:40 am , Tuesday,
5th April,2011, WWF Resource Center
Leeja and Naren gossiping
I ...noting down the rejuvenated feelings...

© 2012 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"


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Rejuvenation was a great title it instantly caught my eye. On a critical level I do feel that you can take the theme of rejuvenation deeper. As the poem stands now you let the reader imagine how the examples you give show rejuvenation. But as a reader I'm more interested in your personal rejuvenation (hopefully that makes sense) Overall, this was an enjoyable read. I feel rejuvenated I've been subjected to reading the gloomiest of poems all day lol

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Outstanding, this had such range and brilliance, it made me very curious about the person behind the poet.

You have quite a talent!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hmm...was just looking for a rejuvenation and the title caught my eye...:)
Got ReJuVEnatEd...
Great piece among many gud ones...:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rejuvenation was a great title it instantly caught my eye. On a critical level I do feel that you can take the theme of rejuvenation deeper. As the poem stands now you let the reader imagine how the examples you give show rejuvenation. But as a reader I'm more interested in your personal rejuvenation (hopefully that makes sense) Overall, this was an enjoyable read. I feel rejuvenated I've been subjected to reading the gloomiest of poems all day lol

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

this is good.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 3 people found this review constructive.

A very uplifting poem that focuses on the classic imagery of what is the best within humanity. The structure is superb.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rejuvenation such a word to bring a torrent of vigourous feelings flooding through veins and arteries alike........well written even though it's a blacksmith that strikes an anvil whilst a cobbler hits the last..........;O}

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful! I love the structure of the poem, the way you chose to go to a new line. And the metaphor to the rejuvenation is very good. However, in poems, the first letter of a line is always capitalized, but other than that, I see no mistakes.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 4 people found this review constructive.

I thought and felt Freedom all the way through this special poem!
I hope and trust you get the new begginings you deserve Sanjeeta..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well done! There is a real sense of optimism and ever-springing hope here. Such a joy to read!

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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