She

She -babbled

        -crawled

        -walked

        -bounced

                          -on 'those' way

 

She loved- toys

              -fairy tales

              -gossip

              -folks

                           -of those days

She, now-dreams

              -desires

              -floats

              -'wings'

                           -to touch the majestic blue

 

She -    aspires

           -aims

           -stands up

           -ascends

                           -to be noble-nobler deeds, to do

 

She hence-breaks the shackle

                -bleeds her hands

                -tears up the cage

                -steps out

                            -feels the life- the fragrance

 

She-once prattled

              -had those “toys”

              -Feared-suppressed-learnt

              -moves out

                              -She is now- "the Woman"

 

 

Magnificent-“She” stands…

 

 

 

 

 

Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel “Hridayaninadini”

Wednesday-1:30 AM- LHH-110-IISc-Sep-7-011

Insomniac!

Glorious-Women-are-always

To all the women of the world

Reviews

[Dayran]

I'm not sure where to start. I would like to say however, the magnificence of a woman holding a life in her hands is reminiscent of birth and her role of mother, in many different ways. Mothers would naturally hate anyone coming close to her charge, at a time like this. I figure your last line is a ' leap' from the previous, as it should be. May peace and joy follow the days of your life.

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

As always your words come up graceful :)

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

:)

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Great tribute........... well penned gift..

[sarah]

Wow! this is an amazing piece!

[Arena]

at life's every milestone there is 'growth' and not just aging.. you nicely explored the different dimensions in which a woman grows..

she out-grows her own needs to meet others' , she controls her feelings to feel others' .. gradually she sacrifices everything and even her own life and lives for others'..literally.. this transition is when she becomes a 'woman'

nice work. glad to read it.

[what-the-frick]

This is absolutely, breath-takingly superb!!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Beautiful. A lovely piece of work that qualifies under the so-called 'feminist' title. Woman has found her wings and is flying high.

[Larry Dyson]

especially like the image you chose....a free bird from a cage...

[Thea]

A creative style of writing a piece...Very descriptive... :)))

[Lily Mae]

There's nothing more beautiful then a woman in her own power..the true essence of who she is.. xx excellent write.,.x

[Coyote Poetry]

Without woman. There would not be a world. A beautiful and positive poem. Thank you for the artwork and the poetry. A excellent poem.
Coyote