The Synecdoche- The 9/11

Gently …

Creeps in the life

In this “single” Earth

And sprouts
Here the thousands
of life...

One-

Then two-

Followed by the numbers

and many…

 

And the verve evolves-

Grows-

Divides…

The fragments-

Thus scattered-

All around

 

Rise of-

Billions of thoughts-

Billions of religions-

Billions of “billions”-

The agony, hence, spreads...

 

A decade hushed

And passed...

The pain remains,

Somewhere!

 

"Twins"-so- estranged!

“…division” hence

Seeks a way out!

To unite...

The thoughts-

That shall never unite!

Finally

Blasts out

 The 9/11!

 

 

-Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

9/11/11  Time:1:00 am, LHH-110-IISc

Dedicated to

"All Human , All over the world"

 

 

Reviews

[Amrita Sharma Pokharel]

I have no words left ..I am lucky to get you as my sister... keep on making me feel proud of you...lots of love

And for this poem...I am no more surprised as my jaw-drops when I go through all of your poems ...9/11 is one of them...Excellent

Love
Ams :)

[Joe Shetina]

So gentle an approach to such a terrible event. Well done.

[Daniel88Batson]

Visited ground zero not long ago. It's a terrible tragedy.
Well written.

[Dushyant Thadani]

Interesting adaption of the 9/11... Really a sight many of us don't want to see in any angle... But really beautifully written... Wonderful job...

[Birdman313]

this poem just shows how much hate there still is and to think the only time we as The U.S.A. can come together is after something so profound can happy then 3 hours after the event were right back to hating one another..good poem

[Coyote Poetry]

9-11 change the world for the bad. Allow hate and disappointment to cause war and hate. I pray for better days. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

ur verses, rejuvenates me always....be it be in any form....likes...:))

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Amebiac multiplication very nicely dropped lines with the grace n energy..

[Jaco (Jaik Miller)]

Fantastic! Very different. Not what i expected for a 9/11 poem.

[sarah]

such a strong poem! that was a tragic tragic day this is a great memorial for that day