Our Love

I fell in love with you when the first time you looked into my eyes. I was falling but you held my back. I asked you never to leave me and you promised to be with me all time. I asked you do you love me? And you replied with a smile, Baby, you're my love, you're my life I'm only yours and you are mine. When there was darkness of sorrow you lit a candle of happiness. I asked for a hug and you gave it with a kiss all time. I was afraid of walking ahead but then you came, held my waist and made me run to do my best. In the nightmares you were my saviour, In my life you were my hero. When I thought that all my beauty is lost in vain, But then you came and relieved my pain. I wished on stars for you to live long, And you wished for my health to stay strong. For our love was forever, But I'm sorry I didn't lived for long. Your visit to my grave, is the bestest gift. I know we'll meet again When the sun will show it's reign. Our love will rise once more.When you'll see me and I'll see you again.

Reviews

[The earth (Titan maphah..]

This is a powerful poem with all those lines... I almost cried

[Sanskrity Mishra]

Really?? Thank u so much...

[Pravir]

Its wonderfull. . . . i liked the way you expressed your love through such a beautiful poem. . the ending made me sad but i felt your write is having soul. . nyc one

[Sanskrity Mishra]

Thank u so much :)

[Surya]

Well i have to admit, you kicked it off....story inside it is awful...I loved it...:)

[Sanskrity Mishra]

Really?? Thank u so much.. :)

[Surya]

Yeah, I felt so...coz u mentioned it, like, even after death he visits her grave in yard...that made me like it more...true love...:)

[Sanskrity Mishra]

Hmmm...Thank u

[Wajiha Nayeem]

this is a really really soulful poem..i have no words for this...keep writing.

[Sanskrity Mishra]

thank u for ur reviews...

[A little flame]

A sweet symphony of emotions. Good job(:

[Sanskrity Mishra]

Thank u....

[Najam Us Saher]

So warm and deep poem...I truly loved this....

[Sanskrity Mishra]

Thank u......

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.