I'm yours

My chains are broken,

now im free...

As you stand next to me,

the past is gone and our future shines.

What has become can only last,

if we continue down the path.

We trust, we love,

we fight, we cry.

But in the end,

we make it fine.

Our friendship is strong,

thats no doubt.

You take my hand and understand,

my love is yours until the end.

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[W.C]

the past is gone and our future shines.
What has become can only last,
if we continue down the path.
We trust, we love,
we fight, we cry.
But in the end,
we make it fine.
Our friendship is strong,

......

Nice phrase, indeed loved to read. well written.

[SapphirianVampiress]

Thank you very much :)

[Steven Cash]

Sounds like a song. VERY nice.

[UfoAuthor]

Would that it were true. Never, never go to see an old gypsy in a ragged tent and always, always carry a cheerily painted clothespin with you at all times. If you do, your destinies (plural) may yet still be your own.

[ThIsDaRkRoAdToNoWhErE]

AW, that was SO beautiful!! :D It's like the perfect love poem hehe :) *sighs* Man, it must be so nice to be in love =/ :} I wish u both the best :)

[SapphirianVampiress]

Thank you, it was actually wrote for my book but I guess it does fit. :)