My Life

What happens when your broken
What happens when there's pain
What happens when the past is trying to be a living game
What happens when the nightmares come
What happens when he calls
What happens when the fear kicks in and calls upon the rain
What happened to the smile
What happened to the sun
What happened to life thats slowly coming undone
What happened to the shine upon my eye
What happened to the imagination that usually runs free
What happened to the fearless person that once stood infront of me
What's happening to my life, I want it back for me!

Reviews

[Rasputin]

This is how I feel when I look back on myself as a little kid. I used to be a real person, once. That little b*****d had no idea what was waiting for him just down the road...

[Alex Crow]

This is a really powerful poem with great imagery. Kinda sounds like a song. :)

[Zombri]

I really like the style of this... It's sad, but catchy. Something that seems like could be the opening chant to a movie or something. Very powerful.

[❀ Gabriela ..]

Wonderful, emotional poem. Great job!!

[Kailor Mason]

How true--a stunning portrait of real life beating us down, and a desperate struggle to hold on. I really like the set-up, too--really emphasizes someone's life unraveling. Nicely penned.

[hmm]

Makes one ponder on what they have,
Wonderful writing!

[Reaper]

I like the template of the poem. it adds to it a lot. well done overall.