A L'air Libre' (In the Open Air)

short, poulter's measure

A nice cool breeze circulates

Remnants of the Sunday storm

A red sun rising; beautiful

in its color and form

Red sunrise in the morning

A warning to all sailors

But then the color changed to gold

Maybe a day to savor

Author's Note

Out on the porch in the morn

Reviews

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

Your poem beautifully captures the beauty of nature. The way you describe the breeze and the sunrise is both vivid and poetic. Your use of rhyme and imagery is particularly effective, and it helps to create a sense of wonder and appreciation in the reader. I think that your poem is a testament to the power of art to help us process our emotions and connect with others.

[Miss Owl]

A delightful uplifting poem.
Full of vibrancy and color.

[Coyote Song]

This is very well written and has such lovely imagery.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Ahh!! Thanks for the kind review..I hope that this was a blessed day for you..Sara

[Coyote Song]

You're welcome & it was.