Might Force

Rhyme, short

What a mighty force is flood water

Coursing on its way to the sea

Forcing ones way backward impossibility

Carried away in the flow easiest to be

 

 

Reviews

[Desert Dreamer]

Interesting description of our lives. Sometimes we are carried along with the currents and we are always faced with choices. The image of a floodwater makes me think that sometimes we don't have a choice, at least not the choice of swimming against the mighty force of a raging flood.

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

wow.;this is brilliant as you have captured the everyday struggles of decision making...the ability to stay focussed on the Higher Calling....beautiful

blessings
vincent

[Brandon]

i honistly didn't really get this so im just gonna give you a 100