Words to save me

Words to save me

A Poem by Saraplenty

Will someone please
write something?!


something....

strong enough



strong enough
to rip the f*****g breath from your body.

Because

your ghost keeps breathing
down my neck

*I feel the strangle hold my dear*

sending toxic vapors
down my spine
seeping into
my already
fading
fading
fading



dying
dying
dying



heart.


© 2011 Saraplenty



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This is outstanding, and the structural style you apply to your poetry is really bad a*s( this is the first time I've ever said bad a*s in a review). whats cool about this is that the style seems easy and casual on the surface, but like Blake you write with a deeper purpose. I liked his alot!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Very emotional, love the way you structured the poem and wrote it freely yet it came together so well. Great job!

Posted 4 Months Ago


This is so cool! Very creative and has a unique structure and captivating imagery. I loved it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is outstanding, and the structural style you apply to your poetry is really bad a*s( this is the first time I've ever said bad a*s in a review). whats cool about this is that the style seems easy and casual on the surface, but like Blake you write with a deeper purpose. I liked his alot!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is superb, I can feel the despair in your words.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love the context..great shape of the poem at the end

Posted 6 Years Ago


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absolutely outstanding resolute feeling here.. I love the conviction in the message and the way it captivates the reader..

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Added on March 23, 2011
Last Updated on March 31, 2011
Tags: love, heartache, words

Author

Saraplenty
Saraplenty

Dallas, TX



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I am awesome. And sometimes, I vomit things on to paper to aid in breathing. I write for me, to release what it is I am feeling at that moment, and because I like turning those feelings into so.. more..

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