Words to save me

Words to save me

A Poem by Saraplenty

Will someone please
write something?!


something....

strong enough



strong enough
to rip the f*****g breath from your body.

Because

your ghost keeps breathing
down my neck

*I feel the strangle hold my dear*

sending toxic vapors
down my spine
seeping into
my already
fading
fading
fading



dying
dying
dying



heart.


© 2011 Saraplenty



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This is outstanding, and the structural style you apply to your poetry is really bad a*s( this is the first time I've ever said bad a*s in a review). whats cool about this is that the style seems easy and casual on the surface, but like Blake you write with a deeper purpose. I liked his alot!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Very emotional, love the way you structured the poem and wrote it freely yet it came together so well. Great job!

Posted 11 Months Ago


This is so cool! Very creative and has a unique structure and captivating imagery. I loved it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is outstanding, and the structural style you apply to your poetry is really bad a*s( this is the first time I've ever said bad a*s in a review). whats cool about this is that the style seems easy and casual on the surface, but like Blake you write with a deeper purpose. I liked his alot!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is superb, I can feel the despair in your words.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love the context..great shape of the poem at the end

Posted 7 Years Ago


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absolutely outstanding resolute feeling here.. I love the conviction in the message and the way it captivates the reader..

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Added on March 23, 2011
Last Updated on March 31, 2011
Tags: love, heartache, words

Author

Saraplenty
Saraplenty

Dallas, TX



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I am awesome. And sometimes, I vomit things on to paper to aid in breathing. I write for me, to release what it is I am feeling at that moment, and because I like turning those feelings into so.. more..

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