A Death

Her blood covers my hands,
her breathing shallow.

Please let me go,
leave me to die.

I let her come along,
she could have lived.

Your magic can't save,
leave me to die.

I should have stopped,
shaping my monster.

You didn't know her future,
leave me to die.

No please I can fix this,
I can save you.

Don't go after her,
just leave me be.

I'm sorry Belle, darling.
I should have been stronger.
I should have let you
leave.

Reviews

[Sarah]

The last two lines are so powerful

[Dez]

CLAP CLAP CLAP CLAP CLAP CLAP CLAP CLAP! LOVE THE LAST LINE I WISH THAT I WOULD HAVE THOUGHT OF SOMETHING LIKE THIS SO I COULD PUT IT IN MY STORY! please read my story know it's long but just read some of it. anyway yeah i really like this any this was very inspirational! thank you!

[Sarah W. French]

Thank you very much. I actually got the idea from a fanfic...
And I'll read some of your story as soon as i can.