Nothing Wrong

Have you ever not wanted to be in your life

 

Wish you could curl up like your cat

 and sleep through the day

  block out everything going around

 

Wish to be apart of a book about that far off place and time

 that has lolly rain and golden sunshine

 

To see the beautiful colour that has no name

To smell the flower which has never been smelt

To swim in that icy blue water

 and forget what is real and what is not

 

To be a part of a place

 where you don't have to worry about what people think

  where you can't do any wrong

Author's Note

Please tell me what u think of this.

Reviews

[Chris]

This is very, very valid and unnderstandable...

[Teenage Romeo]

to be honest i have had moments when i did want to die squitely and fade away but you put asmile on ur face to block out the bad stuff and keep those friends you have smiling.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

I think its very Honest .... I often feel like that Yossi

[Coyote Poetry]

I want to be a rich woman cat who dress me up. Allow me to be fat and lay around all day. I like the desire of the poem. Sometime we need a place to rest and think. I like the desire and the ending of this poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[EMF]

What I think? Perfect discription, beautiful style and as evocotive a poem as I have ever read. Perfect job

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

The place you describe so poetically is something that
certainly I hope to be part of and be in...
terrific write :)