Dance in this storm

Dance in this storm

A Poem by Sarah_Allen_Poe
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Dance with me in this rain, The downpour will be the tempo...

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Dance with me in this rain,
Just you and me,
The downpour will be the tempo,
And the thunder is the drums,
The lighting shall be paparazzi,
You can be the lead singer,
And I'll hum along,
Spin me around,
The wind cheers us on,
Whistling and yelling,
Spin me like a tornado,
Dance with me in this rain,
Dance with me through our storm


© 2018 Sarah_Allen_Poe



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I love this piece absolutely beautiful

Posted 2 Days Ago


Sarah_Allen_Poe

2 Days Ago

Thank you so much ;)
Something about being human. We deem ourselves Gods of sorts, testing and even destroying nature for good or ill intent, yet in the midst of that, some simply wish to create art, or as u say, dance in mother nature. Couldn't we have all simply danced, becoming closer to not just each other, but the stars skies and seas? Its deeply depressing how humanity has chosen to deny the simple pleasures, in pursuit of its own destruction (ends rant)

Posted 2 Days Ago


🤪

2 Days Ago

id also like to add [since i jus thought about it after already having posted my above rant], your i.. read more
Sarah_Allen_Poe

2 Days Ago

Thank you so much- your comments really mean a lot to me :)
i agree with you 100% percent
This is pretty cool. I like your weather analogies. Good job!

Posted 2 Days Ago


Sarah_Allen_Poe

2 Days Ago

thank you!
(Jeff) Careful, if you dance in a storm you get struck by lightning. if you get struck by lightning it would be funny to watch. Dont worry though, your brain wouldnt be harmed, cus its already fried!

Posted 2 Days Ago


the three trolling trolls

2 Days Ago

(Micky) you know being on this websights starting to change us. The more comments i read the less of.. read more
Sarah_Allen_Poe

2 Days Ago

hahaha. i hope so
Sarah_Allen_Poe

2 Days Ago

And you can try to tear me apart. I dare you. I'm invincible haha. You won't ever pull me down haha... read more
Very, very nicely written, well done.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Sarah_Allen_Poe

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you :)
This is actually good. I've read like eight thousand "why me darkness and death, people don't understand me like I" blah blah self masturbation and razors poems on this site. Do you like zombie?

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Sarah_Allen_Poe

3 Weeks Ago

Hahaha! Well, you won't find razors, masturbation, and no one loves me stuff in my poetry. My poetry.. read more
CLR9

3 Weeks Ago

I like zombie too.
The drum of my heartbeats is calling for someone special.
I am dancing in the storm.

Hats off to you!

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


Sarah_Allen_Poe

4 Weeks Ago

Thank you! Hats off to you too!
This review may be biased because I love a great thunderstorm. It truly has a rhythmical touch to it and you capture it perfectly. You're able to tie serene human interactions together with the events of such a thing that could be seen as unpleasant in such a laconic poem. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Sarah_Allen_Poe

1 Month Ago

Thank you for your review! It means a lot!
Now this made me actually want it to thunder and lightning just to do as you said. It made my heart skip a beat and put a massive smile on my face. Reading this wonderful, light-hearted joyous poem.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Sarah_Allen_Poe

1 Month Ago

Thank you! I love a good thunderstorm... Its so majestic and powerful
I love the downpour will be our tempo

Posted 2 Months Ago


Sarah_Allen_Poe

2 Months Ago

Thank you roman version of Dionysus! Your so kind!

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Added on July 9, 2018
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