Dance in this storm

Dance in this storm

A Poem by Sarah_Allen_Poe
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Dance with me in this rain, The downpour will be the tempo...

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Dance with me in this rain,
Just you and me,
The downpour will be the tempo,
And the thunder is the drums,
The lighting shall be paparazzi,
You can be the lead singer,
And I'll hum along,
Spin me around,
The wind cheers us on,
Whistling and yelling,
Spin me like a tornado,
Dance with me in this rain,
Dance with me through our storm


© 2018 Sarah_Allen_Poe



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If we are to have rain, and lately we have had plenty, this sounds like a decent way to the condition
A good fun write
Dave

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


LOVE! LOVE! LOVE! Living in drought-stricken California, I crave rain so I had to click on your poem. This is one of the best jazzy inspiring rain-themed poems I've seen lately. It makes a person want to get up & shake a leg. I love your wide variety of personifications, which brings the whole party alive. Love this! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


Sarah_Allen_Poe

1 Month Ago

Oh thank you so much! :D I'm glad you enjoy. Haha- it's winter right now in Maine so I don't crave t.. read more
wow, I can totally picture this crazy dance and hear the sounds as it builds to a sunny climax after the storm has passed.


Posted 1 Month Ago


Sarah_Allen_Poe

1 Month Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed!
A wonderful and hopeful poem. To dance in a Summer rain with someone you love. Perfect place. Thank you Sarah for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


Sarah_Allen_Poe

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much for your review!
Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

You are welcome Sarah.
Wonderful. Whimsical. Romantic and sweet yet I also sense something dark in this. Great work!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Sarah_Allen_Poe

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much!
Succinct and thoroughly enjoyable poem! This poem exudes a kind of kinetic energy to match the sensation of dancing in the rain.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Sarah_Allen_Poe

1 Month Ago

thank you so much :P
Dancing in the storm
Could just be to keep warm
Dance on one leg while putting waterproof trousers on
Got em on now we run
Inside until we see the sun


Only thing I could conjour up - Yes I liked it

Posted 1 Month Ago


Sarah_Allen_Poe

1 Month Ago

thank you so much :) your review means a lot
The tempo jas an element of mania to it. I like it

Posted 1 Month Ago


Sarah_Allen_Poe

1 Month Ago

thank you for your review
To dance together in the storm would need courage, interest and a lot of coordination of movement. If two can do this, they are for keeps. A very interesting look at relationships.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Sarah_Allen_Poe

1 Month Ago

thank you so much for the review Dhara!
Dhara_Ditzy Kat

1 Month Ago

You are welcome Sarah :)

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Added on July 9, 2018
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Tags: Fights, dance, rain, storm, tempo, love

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Pretty much an average teen. But more the average geek. I love things like anime, manga, video games, and especially Pokemon. I'm the awkward kid who knows a bajillion facts about Pokemon or the G.. more..

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