Dance in this storm

Dance in this storm

A Poem by Sarah_Allen_Poe
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Dance with me in this rain, The downpour will be the tempo...

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Dance with me in this rain,
Just you and me,
The downpour will be the tempo,
And the thunder is the drums,
The lighting shall be paparazzi,
You can be the lead singer,
And I'll hum along,
Spin me around,
The wind cheers us on,
Whistling and yelling,
Spin me like a tornado,
Dance with me in this rain,
Dance with me through our storm


© 2018 Sarah_Allen_Poe



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Dance with me through our storm, the atmosphere of love, minds will retain,
Your poem inspired me to add a bit on. Great poem.

Posted 21 Hours Ago


Sarah_Allen_Poe

21 Hours Ago

Thank you :)
I liked the viewpoint of this poem-optimism. Inspite of the bad weather, you take it as an opportunity to enjoy with your partner and regard each and every element of ill weather as the instruments of dance. A nice poem indeed!

Posted 1 Week Ago


Sarah_Allen_Poe

1 Week Ago

Thank you!
I like the lyrical quality here. Really adds to the feel of this write. To me, any relationship is a dance of sorts, you just gotta know how to go along with the beat!
Nice write.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sarah_Allen_Poe

1 Week Ago

Thank you!
i like the message of the poem it uplifts one's spirit that despite the ill weather such as rain and storm we can still find happiness especially when shared with someone special

Posted 1 Week Ago


Sarah_Allen_Poe

1 Week Ago

Thank you sette!
I really like this one. Whimsical, mysterious, and I'm a sucker for all things nature-related to try and express emotion and intent. Nice work

Posted 1 Week Ago


Sarah_Allen_Poe

1 Week Ago

Thank you strife! A pleasure, as always!
To dance in the rain is a delight. As is this poem

Posted 1 Week Ago


Sarah_Allen_Poe

1 Week Ago

Thanks lyn! But the delight it you! ;)
sounds romantic,dancing in the rain bare foot

Posted 1 Week Ago


Sarah_Allen_Poe

1 Week Ago

Thanks for commenting workman!
 wordman

1 Week Ago

you`re welcome
How wonderful to dance in the rain...I like stomping through the puddles in my boots myself. My daughter and I went out one day to do just that...stomping through puddles in our boots and raincoats. The lightning and thunder would have driven us inside though. When I was a kid I used to climb trees in thunderstorms. But now I have to be the safety patrol. :) Great read.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Sarah_Allen_Poe

1 Week Ago

Thank you!
I like this Sarah. It has worked really well weaving the motion of the wind and the storm to portray the rhythm of the dance. The thunder is the drums is one of many good images..
Good work.
All the best.
Alan

Posted 1 Week Ago


Sarah_Allen_Poe

1 Week Ago

Thank you! You're so kind!
This kind of weather does quicken the pace and bring about a need to dissipate some energy. Sounds like a perfectly good monsoon dance to me. Great piece!!

Posted 1 Week Ago


Sarah_Allen_Poe

1 Week Ago

Thank you for taking the time to comment :)

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Added on July 9, 2018
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Tags: Fights, dance, rain, storm, tempo, love

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Sarah_Allen_Poe

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I'm at heart a Team Rocket member. I love manga and anime. (Animes like Sailor Moon, Pokemon, The Death Note...) I also love K-pop, J-pop and Nightcore! Drawing, Reading, and Geeking is my life. .. more..

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