More Than Friends

More Than Friends

A Poem by Sarah Hale
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heh... i like it it's free verse that tells a story ^-^

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"just friends"

he promised

walking away slowly

standing there she watched him go

 

Glad she didn't let him know

how much she cared

his timing wasn't right

she told herself

he understands

she whispered

 

but as he walked away

she felt her heart skip a beat

she turned around in time to see

a wild driver coming his way

 

without a second thought

she screamed his name

running with barely the time

to push him out of the way

 

He stands at her hospital bed

watching her sleep

swearing that his heart is hers to keep.

© 2008 Sarah Hale


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this is a really good write.
Keep writing.
^_^ ~Mita


Posted 15 Years Ago


Wow what passion of love and sacrifice! This was wonderful! It is rare to see a character so willing to die for another, that makes this a rare gem!
Great Job! :)


Posted 15 Years Ago


I love the idea that you're conveying here, but as a suggestion I think it would be better if you used literary devices to strengthen the image you're showing in the poem.

Posted 16 Years Ago


very very very good.
I congradulate you on this outstanding poem of love that is oh so tragic and full of caring.
You did a wonderful job and now..... I steal this poem.... (not steal it as in steal it and say it's mine, but steal as in you can't have it) ^-^

Your buddy

Posted 16 Years Ago


I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!^-^ its sad but...I LOVE IT!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


wonderful little story about love... a good read and well written as well.

Amanda

Posted 16 Years Ago


I love this it's so sweet. Adorable. And well written to boot. Can't argue with that. :p
Well written indeed.
LGD

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on March 9, 2008

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Sarah Hale
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I like to write poems, fanfics, original stories, you name it. I love anime and am a crazed fan of Hiei from Yu Yu Hakusho. I also love to draw but well I think writing words then doodling around them.. more..

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