A Fairy Sparrow

A Fairy Sparrow

A Poem by Saravanan Evu
"

A Fairy Sparrow" - A poetry about The Pursuit Of Life's Journey

"
Rain starts to smile when,
dark clouds shuts down the sky.
A fairy sparrow starts to fly,
to found a place to hide.

But, when it starts to fly
Storm passes..!
Thunderstorms..!
so the fairy sparrow afraid to fly.

Then it sat on a dry tree,
his eyes were shed with tears.
Because his faith were shut with
full of fears.

When rain falls on his eyes,
it wipes the tears from his eyes.
And it realized to have faith 
on his life.

But it didn't bring hope 
to his life.

The drop of his tears 
falls on the flower bud which
was in the ground.
At the moment. 
A flower blooms with the smile
which carry thorns on his stem.

Fairy sparrow feels wonder
when the flower smiles.
And realized, it smiles because 
it carry the hope on his scope.

Then it wiped the tears 
from his eyes, 
and it hides the wounds 
in his life.

Fairy sparrow seeks his wings to fly
then it flies away in the sky 
with a smile.

Because faith and hope brings 
the courage to the scope 
of his life.


-FIN-

© 2015 Saravanan Evu


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This is a beautiful story/prose writing and I love it - even though the wording is great with the rhyming and beautiful description so vivid in my mind; Love birds too (great metaphor). It a sweet, lovely journy to find happiness. Wow, I loved it. Keep writing. Thank you!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saravanan Evu

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot.
Confuser

8 Years Ago

Re-Read from contest; forgotten, loved it all over again!



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Beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing these words. :) Rudi

Posted 8 Years Ago


Love the imagery! Great write :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Saravanan Evu

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
Nice message drawn from nature. good read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Saravanan Evu

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
A meaningdful story. Thank you for sharing...:).......

Posted 9 Years Ago


Saravanan Evu

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)......
What an instance to depict the power of faith in life! I enjoyed reading:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Saravanan Evu

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
This is a beautiful story/prose writing and I love it - even though the wording is great with the rhyming and beautiful description so vivid in my mind; Love birds too (great metaphor). It a sweet, lovely journy to find happiness. Wow, I loved it. Keep writing. Thank you!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saravanan Evu

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot.
Confuser

8 Years Ago

Re-Read from contest; forgotten, loved it all over again!
Love your wording!
Great Work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Saravanan Evu

9 Years Ago

Thamks a lot!

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Saravanan Evu
Saravanan Evu

Chennai, India



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