Deeper

Deeper

A Poem by Saria Lon
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Lost love and buried emotions.

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Deeper

Into the ocean's waves I weep,
salty tears, sinking,
melding slowly in the deep,
I stay there, thinking
what, in such great depths, do starfish see?
It must be lonely.
Like last night's quiet
your eyes are home to me.
Hot drops swirl in the cold world,
becoming one.
That was the death of the gold girl,
now she's gone -
lost under the moonlit dirt,
tears to never see the sun.

© 2016 Saria Lon



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Loss, missing, grieving and the sense-less observings...questions.
Soft and sad.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Love the images, the expression of loss, hot tears and cold world, the immersion of this beautiful soul in the deep of grief and sadness. A beautiful depiction of the depth of mourning present over the loss of the gold girl. Beautiful and touching.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is an enjoyable poem to read aloud. Nice writing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so deep . you've written this one with style . good job

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Saria Lon

1 Year Ago

Thanks! :)

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Added on July 7, 2016
Last Updated on July 14, 2016
Tags: poem, sonnet, emotion, love, lost, sad, ocean

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Saria Lon
Saria Lon

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I'm Taylor! I love storytelling and poetry for its help in self-understanding and acceptance, the understanding and acceptance of others, and the understanding and acceptance of our world. For these .. more..

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