My Birds of Paradise

My Birds of Paradise

A Poem by Katie Lynn
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Just a result from emotional inspiration from a documentary on birds.

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The Bird of Grief,
Sings for my sorrow.

The Bird of Hope,
Sings for the 'morrow.

The Bird of Joy,
Sings for my smile.

The Bird of Love,
Sings all the while.

The Bird of Peace,
Sings for my mind.

My Birds of Paradise,
For me to find.

© 2010 Katie Lynn


Author's Note

Katie Lynn
Just some inspiration. I don't know how people will take it, but I thought it turned out fairly decent. :)

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Oh the wondrous birds there are for us behold. Well done!

I would suggest to put a dash in the last couplet, given the "Bird of Paradise" doesn't seem to sing, for it's not quite found yet. Adds a bit of power with the dash. Just a thought.

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is a really really great poem! Very clever, impressive and well done.
I really do love this!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Katie Lynn

11 Years Ago

Thank you :-)
That was truly inspirational

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so wonderful and lovely.
Much enjoyed

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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