The Fairies

Wrote this one for a competition in my school, enjoy.

Deep in the woods on a magical night,
A little girl wandered through the moonlight,
Peeking in hollows, inside an old tree,
Searching for something impossible to be.

Lights and shadows danced all around,
But made not a noise, not even a sound,
The damp air grew chilly with a breath of wind,
And with it came voices that it did send.

Giggles and laughter, a frolic, a dance,
The creatures came out with their radiance,
They whistled and cheered in sheer delight,
Unaware of the child hidden in the night.

Her eyes grew wide and filled with glee,
At the sight of the creatures she got to see,
And to this very day she remembers that sight,
Deep in those woods on that magical night.

Author's Note

Just a little mythical approach. :)

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

I have to say It I cant really critique you here.Your works are beautiful different from mine but so beautiful I have to say you have your own voice dont let me ruin it.I know many way older who still search for their voice you seem to have found yours I think was wrong in my advice to you.Whatever lights the soul In you It is very bright and endearing
100/100

[Tony]

Catchey cadence! Like the musical quality-- the rhymes move things along pleasantly. You deliver the friendly and exciting images of a secret world out of view-- really adds to the depth and adventure feeling to the poem.