The Train

"Nothing can stop it, it can’t be derailed, It simply runs its course, The unbreakable will of my very life Is just like this Iron Horse"

The rumbling of the railroad tracks,
Calms my uneasy soul,
A rushing train just rushes past,
And never stops at all.

Soothing speed and ungainly drive,
It runs right on along,
Quells my spirit in deepest parts,
Grinding metal sings a song.

Nothing can stop it, can’t be derailed,
It simply runs its course,
Unbreakable will of my own life,
Is like this Iron Horse.

My drive is fierce, my skill unmatched,
Nothing stands in my way,
As I race along my tracks of life,
Day after day after day.

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

God this soo grand I love it You write of the finer things that others feel but dont know how to say .This is the key to immortality
100/100

[Coinneach MacAnraoi]

Such vividness. I like how you relate your own strong will to the relentless power of a train. Excellent!

[deeps]

Now this is truly amazing!
I could hear this as a song.
I adored your last stanza, it was my fave.
Awesome wriitng skills.

[Tate Morgan]

Its soothing speed and ungainly drive,
As it runs right on along,
Quells my spirit in the deepest part,
As grinding metal sings its song.


very good stanzas