Escape

A small composition for those who don't fit into this small world. For those who go through bullying and wish to escape this world. Stay strong.

Through the thorns of life I ran,
Across the sea of blood it all began.
From the mountains of pain
To the fields of disdain.
Two doors I reached and with agony I screeched,
Which is it that is mine?
Where is it that I will be just fine?
Looking around completely distressed,
And tears suppressed
No hope in my life remains
I will forever be tied to these chains.
It hurts to admit
But I have reached the summit.
The summit of heartbreak,
When will life push it's brake?
Suddenly I drift to sleep
The odds are not in favour for this black sheep.
Suddenly a white path in sight,
Could this be my flight
To a world less cruel?
Aren't I such a fool
To even think of another chance!
Instantly I awake...
Two doors I reached,
And helplessly I beseeched.

Author's Note

Hey guys! I have no idea what to feel about this piece. It's very close to my heart.. and to share it with the world anonymously, well im truly blessed. Pls share your opinion on this one 😊

Reviews

[lessa (kenzie)]

Suddenly I drift to sleep
The odds are not in favour for this black sheep.
Suddenly a white path in sight,
Could this be my flight
To a world less cruel?
Aren't I such a fool

I really enjoyed these words, they are truthful. This is a wonderful full of feelings write

[Satvika : )]

Thank you so much! You're words mean a lot to me : )
Stay happy! ❤

[Maria]

Very well written, and full of much emotion, raw and pure to your heart. Loved how you expressed yourself through this writing. Well done.

[Satvika : )]

Hey Maria!
I'm so sorry for the late response..
Thank you so much though. I'm so happy you could feel the poem. :)
Stay happy! ❤❤

[FIN]

This is beautifully written. And captures your agony wonderfully. You have done a very great job!

[Satvika : )]

Thank you so much... I'm happy you could feel the message :)
Stay happy!

[FIN]

You stay happy as well, Love.

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Strong, powerful emotions felt. Well written! Tyfs!

[Satvika : )]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :)
Stay happy

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're most welcome!
Thank you, You too :)

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i love your creativity. you done well at this beautiful poetic piece

[Satvika : )]

Thank you :')