My eyes

My eyes

A Poem by Savannah
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Every time I close my eyes
I sit there
and pray to
GOD

All I see in my eyes
are blurred lines
and tears that fall
everything I see
is always
wrong

The eyes I see through 
are weird
I see illusions of death
instead of
HAPPINESS

My eyes  finds cracked
walls of solemn  silence
when my heart finds 
LOVE

My eyes try to cover
the tears of sadness 
and my heart cracks under the
PRESSURE

My eyes are the most
treasured part of me

They are my 
LIFE

They have seen my
past

And my eyes will witness the
FUTURE

Only my eyes
have seen the 
TRUE
ME

© 2017 Savannah


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