Under Your Shadow

She doesn't wants to overcome her last relationship, she doesn't knows what she's missing, by loosing me.

Under your shadow

 

I’ve been living so little time,

I can barely count my scars,

And I’ve been watching so many stars

Thinking that you’re one of them.

 

You don’t know what love really means,

And I guess that neither do I,

But I know what it feels,

To be in love, with you.

 

You seem to be really fine,

With the life you’re aiming for,

And the truth has never shown,

But I can see it in your eyes.

[BRIDGE]

As you, did with mines…

[CHORUS]

And as I walk, under your shadow

I get the idea that somehow, some when

You’ll recognize my feelings, about you

 

There’s no worse blind that the one,

having eyes doesn’t want to see.

And you’re the one who don’t see,

The different man from him on me.

 

 

I’ve barely birthed two decades,

I have felt so crazy in love

Had to accept she didn’t loved me

Or so told me her dad

I had seen another girl

I've tried to give her a rose

and managed to make her blush

Just to find her feelings were reserved

Guess she saw in my eyes

what you couldn't see till now

[CHORUS]

And as I walk, under your shadow

I get the feeling you're feeling something

That you get to realize, how I love you

There's no cruellest thing to do

to give a man in love some wings

To let him fly so high in the sky

to cut them out to fall from high

Author's Note

This is just a kind of a sketch, it's not a definitive work. Enjoy :)

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i really like the scars part...would have liked to have that last line in the first verse refer to the scars rather than the stars....something had me thinking that was where you were going...

i particularly liked the line "i've barely birthed two decades" that is such good wording...

[Fernando Dardón]

I liked your review very much. I liked the "I've barely birthed two decades" too, thanks for that. About the scars and stars verses, I guess I didn't understand,haha.

Greetings,

Javier

[The Black Warrior]

This is very good and i enjoy it! Very romantic and sweet :D

notes:

I get the idea that somehow, (some when) , I would take this part
The different man from him on me. I would change 'on' to 'and'

It is up to you ofcourse...thank you for sharing your beautiful work!

[Fernando Dardón]

Well, would you explain me why you would make that first change?. But maybe I was misunderstood on the second part:
what I meant to say with that is that I'm a different man, different than the kind of man "he" is.
Isn't there any other way to say it? Since the change you suggest doesn't reflects what I want to say.

Thanks for the comment by the way, I really appreciate it :) And I'm glad you liked it.

Greetings,

Fernando

[The Black Warrior]

It was only a suggestion Fernando :D