Deep, very deep

Deep, very deep

A Poem by Fernando Dardón
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Something from my indisde...

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Deep, very deep
Under the waves
beneath the whales.
In the deep blue sea.

Deep, very deep.
Where coldness embraces light
Where darkness shows its face.
Where sea current can't flow through.

Deep, very deep
Where Sun shines no more,
and no sound can be heard,
yet thoughts can run free.

There my eyes can't see.
There my lungs can't breath.
There my head spins madly on
There my heart feels oppressed.

Deep, very deep.
Heavy feelings pulls me to the bottom,
heavy thoughts come out of nowhere,
and they recall darkness to my being

Shattered dreams?
Confused ideals.
Unconscious pain?
Pretended happiness.

Reckless impulses?
Fire inside my heart.
Unsober mind?
Teary eyes.

Deep, very deep
all those demons hide
they stay undercover
'cause they cannot be dismissed.

So I have to stay alive...

© 2016 Fernando Dardón


Author's Note

Fernando Dardón
Spelling mistakes corrected. If you see anything else let me know please :D
Ok, NOW there should not be mistakes xD

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This might just be your best piece so far! I absolutely love love love it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Fernando Dardón

7 Years Ago

ANd I absolutely love your review. Thanks!!! :)
The last line made it all come together. I enjoyed this, Thanks for sharing

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fernando Dardón

7 Years Ago

THANK YOU VERY MUCH. I appreciate very much your review. Seriously :)

Great! I was reading so intently the whole time I just love how it sucks you into the poem! ^_^

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fernando Dardón

7 Years Ago

Yes, actually that was the intention. To introduce myself into the poem little by little. Thanks for.. read more

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Fernando Dardón
Fernando Dardón

Guatemala City, Guatemala, Guatemala



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I'm an engeneering student who likes "non-engeneering stuff". That's why none of the people I am with undestands me. I've allways been very curious about things (the reason why I'm studing engeneering.. more..

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