Always

A Father's Day Poem

Always 

To my Father’s heart, that will always bleed blue,

Have no doubt that I will always love you.

Through tears and through pain, 

I will always need you, to suffer with the sane.

You are all that I need

Through all your teachings I will always succeed.

My Daddy you will always be,

Through no other man, your eyes I will see. 

In you I will always find strength. 

Too much to measure in width or length. 

To my Father’s heart, that will always bleed blue. 

I have no doubt that I will always love you. 

Throughout all my days

Always and always. 

Reviews

[LJW]

Beautiful.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem for your father. Age make us respect our elders. We learn what life is truly is and understand the pain and thoughts of a father. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Layla J Omorose]

This poem was a very nice tribute to your father. I liked the rhyming it gave it a smooth flow. Short and simple it gets the job done. Nice work.

[nevermindfan1991]

To my Father’s heart, that will always bleed blue,
Have no doubt that I will always love you.

Through tears and through pain, 
I will always need you, to suffer with the sane.

You are all that I need
Through all your teachings I will always succeed.

My Daddy you will always be,
Through no other man, your eyes I will see. 

In you I will always find strength. 
Too much to measure in width or length. 

To my Father’s heart, that will always bleed blue. 
I have no doubt that I will always love you. 
Throughout all my days
Always and always. 

This was nice, simple poem. It flowed for the most part but there some rhyming I was not comfortable with. The use of sane to rhyme with pain seemed forced. So was the rhyming strength and length. Also it seems too simple and if you could add more you should.

[Mark]

What could we know of loves austere and lonely offices? - Robert Hayden.
Not an exact quote.