Love With a Twist

Love With a Twist

A Poem by Margarette

SOMETIMES, Someone Says Something really SMALL but it FITS Right into this EMPTY SPACE… in the heart…


Everytime I close my eyes

I always have this dream

Where I could be with you

And you would love me too


Every single day of my life

From that time I laid my eyes on you

I can’t help but have this feeling

Building up inside me ready to burst


I always look forward

To Tuesdays and Fridays at school

Because then, I’ll get the chance to see you

At that same spot with your friends


Then I wish nights would have been longer

So I would forever repeat those wonders

Of the magic within my fantasy

Where reality is most unlikely


Just a glimpse of your face

And a glance to your side

Makes me the happiest person on Earth

A moment waiting for remembrance


I do not know how it’d come to this

You are two years younger than me

An uncertainty I’ve had

Although age does not make a difference in love


I’m a science major

You’re a literature student

Can we blend together in terms of intellect?

Put one and one to make two sets of minds?


A lot of worries are ahead

So little time to spare

I wonder if in another space and time

Will it be you who’s living my life?


I try to hide this agitation

Whenever you pass me by

The way I try to look at you

Cannot hide these thoughts I’ve had


One time, when I was eating

With my best friend at the café

How can I ever forget that special day?

Where you finally look at my way


But then again, doubts and anxiety overtook me

Maybe he knew, what should I do?

He’ll certainly avoid me in the future

Sounds like a stalker thing to do


I didn’t look at him

For fear of whatever lies ahead

That’s when my best friend told me

What I unexpectedly wanted to hear


“I think he was waiting

For you to return that glance

Maybe, confirm something else

Like admiration which a crush would do


The wisdom behind those words

Never seem to fail me at that

And I hope, one day, I’ll have the courage

To face my true love and tell him what I feel


Happy Valentine’s Day!

© 2013 Margarette

Author's Note

So it's a little early for Valentine's Day. But hey, it doesn't matter if you're in love,right? I'm just going through a little bit of anxiety whenever I see my crush and I hope I won't do crazy things in front of him. Hope this gets away anytime now. Feel free to share your thoughts about what you're feeling when the person you love/like is just a short distance from you.:>

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aww! :3 Nice

Posted 5 Years Ago

love can make one go gaga girl

Posted 5 Years Ago


5 Years Ago

I agree!
been there and this describes exactly what it was like....thanks for the memory

Posted 5 Years Ago


5 Years Ago

You're welcome! Glad I've relive your memory.:)
awww thats so cute.. thank you for sharing. this reminded me of before me and my boyfriend started dating and still feel like i dont want to do anything crazy but at least now he will prob back me up if i do haa.. oh memories.. and love was a only a short distance away all we had to do was say it :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


5 Years Ago

Aw, you have a very lovely experience. Hope I'll also get my special person soon. haha!:D It's just .. read more

5 Years Ago

Don't be afraid .. I know you can do it :) you have amazing skill as a writer and remember it is al.. read more

5 Years Ago

Thanks! I feel much better.:)
a lovely write, it is always wonderful and anxious when we have a crush.

Posted 5 Years Ago


5 Years Ago

Thanks for the review!
This is really beautiful and eloquent. I really like how you can create something so pure and fine with your words. It's very good.

Posted 5 Years Ago


5 Years Ago

Thank you very much! It's my random thoughts going around being creative.
nicely described..
i loved how you described your thoughts and the complete story :)
i hope you will get him :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


5 Years Ago

Thank you so much! The poem is much like a diary of a typical girl in love. Sadly, I think the barri.. read more
A wonderful write ! Love is exhilarating, frustrating & scary all at once but well worth the ride... and just is the same for guys ( ;

Posted 5 Years Ago


5 Years Ago

Yes, I'm glad girls and guys are no different. TV shows always made a fuss that girls always have th.. read more

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