it's not you...

it's not you...

A Poem by Mason Vail

it's not you, it's me

the words spoken sincerely

but I knew better 

© 2009 Mason Vail


Author's Note

Mason Vail
As soon as I jotted this down on my notepad, it gave me the giggles and I'm still giggling about it a day later because... who speaks the first line? :)

I amuse myself. What a dork! :P

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This is intriguing to me...I'm not exactly sure why. But there is power in the three lines that I don't think you could have accomplished if it were any longer. I like this a whole lot. Nice job.
p.s. And I hope you enjoy your laughing fit. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 3, 2009
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A writing poser if ever there was one. A dabbler, perhaps, if one is feeling generous. I am (or was) a computer scientist / biologist doing cell and tissue simulation R&D. For no good reason, I f.. more..

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A Poem by Mason Vail