winter fire

Suddenly, I don't want to be HERE...

bitter chilling winds

lovers' winter fire within

all the heat they need

Author's Note

Loving the many interpretations! *Gasp!* I just wrote something I actually like! It's about time...

Reviews

[Sean Allen]

As spring approaches, the chill of winter quickly becomes a distant memory, but the warmth of love is never forgotten.

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning Haiku-Singles contest!

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Yes...This type of fire...
a need for human life!
good!!!

....Ka Na Kalyanasundaram...

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Hey, now that was a great Hailu!

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Mason,

A very nice haiku. And so true. I like untraditional haiku that don't deal simply with nature, but go beyond to describe the human condition.

Best regards,

Rick

[Salvatore Buttaci]

A great third line. The whole poem is good.

[Soft Spoken]

It's cruel world...